nessie
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Quote: you din't realize how hard or easy things are untill you are faced with them.......... me
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Nick-Name: nessa, lady vanessa, george, kayze-kayla zeveon, nessie, jesus freak, bible thumper
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 |  Subject: ever changing ways  Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:47 pm | |
| They start out sweet and innocent
with you till the end
and everywhere that you go
your always with your friends
school grows big
as well as the people around you
changing all the time
never thinking that you are too
years go by and you realize
many have left
and your once big pack friends
is now a bottle of lies
noone to help you through tight spots
or to heal your wounds
they are gone and so are you
thanks to ever changing ways |
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Kifu
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Quote: "You went all in on a pair of sevens?" "Um . . . yeah." ~ Mom and I, poker
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| | Subject: Re: ever changing ways Sun Jul 05, 2009 8:23 pm | |
| It holds a good point, this poem. A couple lines could be tried to be shortened to make it a little more flowy (lol, funny word), but otherwise good. |
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nessie
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Number of posts: 41
Age: 14
Quote: you din't realize how hard or easy things are untill you are faced with them.......... me
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Nick-Name: nessa, lady vanessa, george, kayze-kayla zeveon, nessie, jesus freak, bible thumper
Registration date: 2009-02-28
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| | Subject: Re: ever changing ways Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:21 pm | |
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