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PostSubject: The Wall That We Stare At   Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:51 pm

We look and we stare
for no reason at all
tell me please tell me
why do we stare at the wall
it is still there
and not moving an inch
it will just sit there
with the dust as its friend
over and over
we look and we stare
for no reason at all
so why oh why
do we stare at the wall
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PostSubject: Re: The Wall That We Stare At   Sun Jul 05, 2009 8:22 pm

I loved the flow of the poem. I read it aloud, and it rolled off my tongue! Nice job.

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PostSubject: Re: The Wall That We Stare At   Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:22 pm

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