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nameless
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Number of posts : 109
Age : 30
Quote : life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain
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Nick-Name : I AM THE BRUTE SQUAD
Registration date : 2008-08-22
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 | Subject: YEA's poems  Thu Dec 04, 2008 5:52 pm | |
| Time to spend with you,
is all i want to do,
happieness es never enough to ask for,
just walk on through my back door,
Hope is never enough to give,
all i want to do is live
all i want today,
is for the pain to go away,
all i want tomarrow,
is to rid you of your sorrow
all i want for us is that same old lust
i look deep into your eyes,
i know the words but the just won't come out'
i break the siltence by hugging you,
and in the breeze of the moon,
i say the three words that mean soo much,
i love you
two pieces of my heart that will never be one again
as she holds my broken heart in one hand,
i feel betyrayed as i notice,
that my best friends hand is in her other | |
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Kifu
Admin
Number of posts : 2986
Age : 29
Quote : I'm baking pillows. Burn them slowly, keeps them fluffy! Mmmmmm, pillows.
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Nick-Name : Abby
Registration date : 2008-08-18
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| | Subject: Re: YEA's poems Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:01 pm | |
| That will definately spring tears in some eyes, but not mine. Sorry to say. But as I read the poem, I thought in my head 'oh, just another romance.' But then I realized I was reading your work after the last stanza, and laughed at myself.
Great symbolism, if I don't say myself. You have my 5/5 on this one. Nicely done, YEA.
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Amy
Co-Admin
Number of posts : 1247
Age : 29
Quote : When life gives you lemons--drink chocolate milk!! Wait, what?- Me
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Nick-Name : Amy, Nicoma, Gryffindor, Rene
Registration date : 2008-09-28
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| | Subject: Re: YEA's poems Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:43 pm | |
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Sara
Draft
Number of posts : 506
Age : 28
Quote : "You died for me to prove you loved me. Look where that's gotten you now."
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Registration date : 2008-11-20
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| | Subject: Re: YEA's poems Sun Dec 07, 2008 1:54 pm | |
| I'm no sucker for romance. I've always shunned that sort of thing. But these poems are far from mushy like most. They're very good. Awesome work. x33 | |
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Lara
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Number of posts : 173
Age : 29
Quote : Turn your face to the sun and the shadows fall behind you. ~ Maori Proverb
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Registration date : 2008-12-01
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| | Subject: Re: YEA's poems Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:24 pm | |
| I understand what the poem means, I have been there and I don't want to go back. Even if it does bring cool, hard flashs of my past; it also brings flashs of the good things. I love it and it makes me want to cry; I'm not sure if it is the poem or something else. You did a great job. +1 Pencil
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AFried
Idea
Number of posts : 56
Age : 30
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Registration date : 2008-10-23
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| | Subject: Re: YEA's poems Mon Dec 08, 2008 7:28 pm | |
| these poems are fantastic man i was ging to post more but now looking at your poems i think i will try to make better ones. | |
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nameless
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Number of posts : 109
Age : 30
Quote : life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain
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Nick-Name : I AM THE BRUTE SQUAD
Registration date : 2008-08-22
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| | Subject: Re: YEA's poems Thu Dec 18, 2008 5:45 pm | |
| thx guys i didn't really like them at first because they seemen cheesey but i wanted to make shure i wasn't just being irratuional | |
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nameless
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Number of posts : 109
Age : 30
Quote : life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain
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Nick-Name : I AM THE BRUTE SQUAD
Registration date : 2008-08-22
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Pencils: 8
| | Subject: Re: YEA's poems Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:58 pm | |
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