george Garbage Pile
Number of posts : 46 Age : 29 Quote : people say hi and i say roar Warning : Nick-Name : nessa, lady vanessa, george, kayze-kayla zeveon, nessie, jesus freak, bible thumper, jz Registration date : 2009-02-28
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| Subject: ever changing ways Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:47 pm | |
| They start out sweet and innocent with you till the end and everywhere that you go your always with your friends
school grows big as well as the people around you changing all the time never thinking that you are too
years go by and you realize many have left and your once big pack friends is now a bottle of lies
noone to help you through tight spots or to heal your wounds they are gone and so are you thanks to ever changing ways | |
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| Subject: Re: ever changing ways Sun Jul 05, 2009 8:23 pm | |
| It holds a good point, this poem. A couple lines could be tried to be shortened to make it a little more flowy (lol, funny word), but otherwise good. | |
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george Garbage Pile
Number of posts : 46 Age : 29 Quote : people say hi and i say roar Warning : Nick-Name : nessa, lady vanessa, george, kayze-kayla zeveon, nessie, jesus freak, bible thumper, jz Registration date : 2009-02-28
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| Subject: Re: ever changing ways Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:21 pm | |
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