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nameless Scrap
Number of posts : 109 Age : 30 Quote : life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain Warning : Nick-Name : I AM THE BRUTE SQUAD Registration date : 2008-08-22
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| Subject: YEA's poems Thu Dec 04, 2008 5:52 pm | |
| Time to spend with you, is all i want to do, happieness es never enough to ask for, just walk on through my back door, Hope is never enough to give, all i want to do is live all i want today, is for the pain to go away, all i want tomarrow, is to rid you of your sorrow all i want for us is that same old lust i look deep into your eyes, i know the words but the just won't come out' i break the siltence by hugging you, and in the breeze of the moon, i say the three words that mean soo much, i love you two pieces of my heart that will never be one again as she holds my broken heart in one hand, i feel betyrayed as i notice, that my best friends hand is in her other | |
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Kifu Admin
Number of posts : 2986 Age : 29 Quote : I'm baking pillows. Burn them slowly, keeps them fluffy! Mmmmmm, pillows. Warning : Nick-Name : Abby Registration date : 2008-08-18
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| Subject: Re: YEA's poems Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:01 pm | |
| That will definately spring tears in some eyes, but not mine. Sorry to say. But as I read the poem, I thought in my head 'oh, just another romance.' But then I realized I was reading your work after the last stanza, and laughed at myself.
Great symbolism, if I don't say myself. You have my 5/5 on this one. Nicely done, YEA.
Oh, and welcome back. | |
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Amy Co-Admin
Number of posts : 1247 Age : 29 Quote : When life gives you lemons--drink chocolate milk!! Wait, what?- Me Warning : Nick-Name : Amy, Nicoma, Gryffindor, Rene Registration date : 2008-09-28
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| Subject: Re: YEA's poems Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:43 pm | |
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Sara Draft
Number of posts : 506 Age : 28 Quote : "You died for me to prove you loved me. Look where that's gotten you now." Warning : Registration date : 2008-11-20
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| Subject: Re: YEA's poems Sun Dec 07, 2008 1:54 pm | |
| I'm no sucker for romance. I've always shunned that sort of thing. But these poems are far from mushy like most. They're very good. Awesome work. x33 | |
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Lara Scrap
Number of posts : 173 Age : 29 Quote : Turn your face to the sun and the shadows fall behind you. ~ Maori Proverb Warning : Registration date : 2008-12-01
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| Subject: Re: YEA's poems Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:24 pm | |
| I understand what the poem means, I have been there and I don't want to go back. Even if it does bring cool, hard flashs of my past; it also brings flashs of the good things. I love it and it makes me want to cry; I'm not sure if it is the poem or something else. You did a great job. +1 Pencil Christmas Countdown | |
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AFried Idea
Number of posts : 56 Age : 30 Warning : Registration date : 2008-10-23
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| Subject: Re: YEA's poems Mon Dec 08, 2008 7:28 pm | |
| these poems are fantastic man i was ging to post more but now looking at your poems i think i will try to make better ones. | |
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nameless Scrap
Number of posts : 109 Age : 30 Quote : life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain Warning : Nick-Name : I AM THE BRUTE SQUAD Registration date : 2008-08-22
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| Subject: Re: YEA's poems Thu Dec 18, 2008 5:45 pm | |
| thx guys i didn't really like them at first because they seemen cheesey but i wanted to make shure i wasn't just being irratuional | |
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nameless Scrap
Number of posts : 109 Age : 30 Quote : life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain Warning : Nick-Name : I AM THE BRUTE SQUAD Registration date : 2008-08-22
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| Subject: Re: YEA's poems Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:58 pm | |
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