george
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 |  Subject: colorful wonderful leaves  Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:00 pm | |
| colorful wonderful leaves
falling from the trees
twirling and swirling
falling and stalling
colorful wonderful leaves
cutie wutie mouse
stuck in the house
round and round
you must go
cutie wuite mouse
danger ranger dog
rolls over in the yard
you walk in
he growls deep
danger ranger dog
tall wirey trees
standing tall and lean
the wind will blow
and so you know
then starts to fall
the colorful wonderful leaves | |
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Amy
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| | Subject: Re: colorful wonderful leaves Mon Jul 20, 2009 5:27 pm | |
| I like it! I like how you got it to repeat back to the beginning. | |
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LockHeart
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| | Subject: Re: colorful wonderful leaves Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:36 pm | |
| Very cool! I like the rythem you have in this. keep up the good work! | |
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Jersey
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| | Subject: Re: colorful wonderful leaves Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:03 am | |
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george
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| | Subject: Re: colorful wonderful leaves Sun Jul 26, 2009 6:29 pm | |
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