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 My words to You

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PostSubject: My words to You   My words to You Icon_minitimeSun Feb 14, 2010 8:14 pm

Live a Lie
Live and die
Never try
On the Outside

Always' lost
Never found
Have no caust
Sleeping sound

Loving you
Always do
Not you too
Always' knew

Have no heart
Torn appart
World far gone
Place so wrong

Tell me now
All the truth
Tell me how
I still live my youth

Draw my blood
I'm just mud
Kill me tonight
I can't fight

You can leave
It's just me
No more glee
So you hate me

No more soul
So I'm told
I can't dream
No point to any

Can't hear your call
As I fall
You stand tall
Now I'm gone

Here to say
My last day
Can't Live no more
Walk out the door

Here I'm dying
No more flying
Wings all torn
Spirit so soar

Take my eyes
If you please
Your demise
I don't need to see

Oh My angel
You will prevail
I will just fail
I feel frail

No one can save me
The demons will eat me
Barry me under
Turn me to sinders

I Can't find love
Just send me above
You will forget me
You never knew me

Here my voice
That's your choice
I will miss you
But will you?
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Age : 28
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PostSubject: Re: My words to You   My words to You Icon_minitimeMon Feb 15, 2010 1:09 pm

like I said, I love it's rythm and the words are good, but not so sure if they belong together :)
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