george
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Quote : people say hi and i say roar
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 |  Subject: Voices  Fri Mar 26, 2010 8:32 pm | |
| voices are crawling all around
coming and going without a sound
whispering here screaming there
where do we go to escape the fears
they are calling to us
no matter where we are
they speak to us
trying to keep us from the right
we hide in fear when all we have to do
is believe and say..........go away | |
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Kifu
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| | Subject: Re: Voices Fri Mar 26, 2010 9:55 pm | |
| I like my voices. . . .  But just a nit picky: Your second line says that the voices come and go without a sound. But . . . voices are sound. | |
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george
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Quote : people say hi and i say roar
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| | Subject: Re: Voices Fri Mar 26, 2010 10:04 pm | |
| yeah i know but voices can be silent when they want to | |
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