LockHeart
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Number of posts : 780
Age : 30
Quote : We all see the brightest stars. But sometimes, the most beautiful star is the one we can't see.~me
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Nick-Name : Lilea/ Ravenclaw/ Meave/ Magicka
Registration date : 2008-11-01
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 |  Subject: Pain.  Sat Jan 31, 2009 6:26 pm | |
| I would fall, but I get back up.
This pain is nothing to me.
I would bleed from my skin, but it dose not matter.
The pain is only miner.
My bones can shatter, but I don't care.
This pain will eventually heal.
But when I cry, I can't handle it.
This pain Is to much for me.
When I feel depressed, I need to cover it up.
I can not handle the pain of emotion.
There for I let my self bleed.
Just to cover my real pain. | |
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stay-back-human
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Number of posts : 664
Age : 28
Quote : Insanity is all around us- Within temptation
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Nick-Name : Cissa/Cissy/ Slytherin/ Belinda
Registration date : 2008-10-25
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| | Subject: Re: Pain. Sat Jan 31, 2009 6:31 pm | |
| oh lilea this is great but im a little worried | |
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Amy
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Number of posts : 1247
Age : 29
Quote : When life gives you lemons--drink chocolate milk!! Wait, what?- Me
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Nick-Name : Amy, Nicoma, Gryffindor, Rene
Registration date : 2008-09-28
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| | Subject: Re: Pain. Sat Jan 31, 2009 9:08 pm | |
| Yes it's great, but it makes you think.... | |
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Kifu
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Number of posts : 2986
Age : 29
Quote : I'm baking pillows. Burn them slowly, keeps them fluffy! Mmmmmm, pillows.
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Nick-Name : Abby
Registration date : 2008-08-18
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| | Subject: Re: Pain. Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:46 am | |
| It's a deep poem, I must give you that. But those are the only real poems out there. If a poem doesn't make you think, you didn't do a good job. I know what you're getting at (I think), and I love it. Keep up the good work.
Therefore is one word. ;) | |
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